Ashleigh Brown

I still love it and can't wait to read some more

I can't even begin to tell you how much I loved this...I stumbled on it and now I love it. You have to message me if you post some more...keep ...

OMG!! i LOVED IT SOOOOO MUCH:)

I AM LOVING THE SUSPENSE....:)

I loved this chapter but I didn't understand when you said that the guys came back...shouldn't Gary be back if the others are back...other than this and some spelling errors ...

I am am like addicted to this story...its great can't wait for more!

I agree with LisaMcooper. Keep up the good work!!

Thank You for reading and reviewing. I am going to go fix all those errors.

I agree with Ashes, I really did not expect him to do that. Anyway I really liked it, and i never lost interest, so that's good. Keep it up...

I think your story is still good, and I love the way you make Chris act like he doesn't like her, it makes the story all the better... Pm me ...

Wow!! That was really good you has me hooked... Keep it up!

Still amazing, I have to say this is one of my favorites... I just can't get enough of it!

Hi I really like your story, it kept me interested and going the whole time....can't wait to read some me if you do.

I liked it very questioning, but like wordartisan it was a little confusing. Other than that I would like to read more of it.

Hi I am really bad at reviews I just like the reading part, and I felt it was great. I was hooked to it when I read the first sentence ...